Bloodbath: At what cost then, This price of victory? - There is no real victor In this gamble with Fate.</i<
After a question mark, I don't think you can but a dash. After any punctuation, for that matter. I think.
Lemme rewrite the YunJae one, okay? I think it's jerky, but I can't place why. Maybe when I rewrite it, I can tell.
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Date: 2008-05-03 11:37 am (UTC)Bloodbath: At what cost then,
This price of victory?
- There is no real victor
In this gamble with Fate.</i< After a question mark, I don't think you can but a dash. After any punctuation, for that matter. I think. Lemme rewrite the YunJae one, okay? I think it's jerky, but I can't place why. Maybe when I rewrite it, I can tell.