ext_77730 ([identity profile] kayjayloves.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] virginangelic 2008-05-08 04:06 pm (UTC)

kya, that was some beautiful angst. the whole time i was like heeeeechul, noo... but it was still beautiful T____T

But his hands remain stained.

And so Heechul prays to a God he doesn't believe in.

That impacted me, how he's to the point where he's doing things he wouldn't usually even think of doing because he's so desperate to get there.


Donghae, the boy who hid behind smiles with his belief in aliens to cling to. (Heechul knows behind the Peter Pan façade laid a broken man – which was why he treated the other boy better than the rest.)
And this too, I like how you described Donghae's innocent childishness but also how he's a normal person - with pain.


He coughs and regurgitates some of the pills, now coated in a mixture of saliva and blood.
Yeah okay, it's a disturbing image, but it really struck me. XD;;


In the distance, the church bells ring and Heechul prepares to make his way to the ceremony.

He never does.

Why must you destroy me with this ending? T______T

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